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firdauz

6 months ago

Storytelling

EMBERS OF THE UNSPOKEN

Chapter 6-Eyes That Woke to a New Life

Warm light brushed Mira’s eyelids, pulling her back into life. She blinked rapidly, her vision blurry, her body heavy—her soul has not adjusted well to her new found body.

A trembling voice reached her first.

“Aurora? Sweetheart? Can you see me?”

Mira opened her eyes slowly and found a middle-aged woman leaning over her—elegant, graceful, eyes red and swollen from crying.

Aurora’s mother.

But Mira didn’t know that.

She didn’t know anyone in this room.

Her heart pounded in panic.

Stay calm. Don’t expose yourself. Don’t let them suspect.

She blinked weakly, letting confusion soften her features.

“Oh—oh thank heavens,” Aurora’s mother whispered, pressing a shaking hand against her lips. “She’s awake—she’s really awake.”

Before Mira could speak, the door pushed open and a young man along side the doctor walked inside—handsome, worried, breath uneven.

“Aurora! Thank God—” he stepped closer, eyes scanning her as if checking for injuries. “Are you okay? Can you hear us?”

Mira’s mind raced.

Her pulse jumped.

She needed to respond—needed to pretend she recognized someone.

He looked close to her age.

Desperate.

Concerned.

Her lips trembled.

“H…husband?” she whispered, staring at him.

The room froze.

Aurora’s mother gasped sharply.

“Wh-what did she say?”

The young man stiffened, confused.

“Aurora, I—I’m not your— I’m Evan. Evan Nicholas. Your cousin-in-law.”

Mira blinked rapidly disappointed by guessing skill, feigning even deeper confusion.

Evan exchanged a troubled look with the doctor.

“She really doesn’t remember anything,” Evan murmured, voice thick with worry.

Aurora’s father stepped forward, his voice shaking.

“But… how is she alive at all? They said she had no pulse—she was declared…”

He couldn’t finish the sentence.

The doctor cleared his throat.

“Trauma-induced memory loss isn’t uncommon. We should give her time.”

Just then, the door opened again.

A polished woman stepped inside—a sleek suit, pristine hair, the kind of spotless professionalism that felt cold even from a distance.

“Good morning,” she said softly. “I apologize for entering without knocking.”

Aurora’s mother straightened.

“Oh—Lydia. Thank you for coming.”

The woman gave a respectful nod.

"It's my pleasure ma'am,” she said, stepping closer to the bed side.”how you doing Aurora."

Mira blink in confusion.

Then her mom whisper in Lydia's ear.

"Ooh!! Am Lydia Hart,” she said, trying as much as possible to ease the tension in the room. “I’m Mr. Adrian Nicholas’s personal secretary."

So he sent a secretary… not him.

Lydia continued with calm composure,

“Mr. Nicholas sends his concerns. He asked that I come and check on Mrs. Nicholas’s condition. He’s currently… occupied with an urgent business matter.”

Not a single person reacted with surprise.

Not her parents.

Not the medical staff.

Not even Evan.

But Mira—

So this was Aurora reality

Mira Daniel, even in a stolen body—felt the wrong everything was.

She felt the shock.

Her husband didn’t come?

Even after she almost died?

He sent his secretary?

A cold anger stirred in Mira’s chest, unfamiliar but sharp.

Evan frowned at Lydia. “He should be here.”

Lydia lowered her gaze. “He will arrive as soon as he can.”

Mira lay still, eyes fixed on the ceiling.

Aurora had lived in this life.

In this marriage.

In this emptiness.

Mira didn’t know Adrian Nicholas yet—but in this moment, she hated him.

Fiercely.

Protectively.

On behalf of the woman whose body she now inhabited.

Evan gently took her hand.

“It’s okay,” he murmured. “We are here with you.”

And Mira smiled and realized something:

In this new life, surrounded by strangers, with an absent husband and secrets everywhere…

Evan’s kindness was the first thing that felt real.

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